I’ve reached Yuki’s two endings, and have started down Hitomi’s path, but I probably won’t be coming back to the game for quite a while. This isn’t to do with the dark themes of Hitomi - it’s certainly a much lighter offering than many untranslated demos I’ve played, but for general gameplay reasons.
The art style: I disliked a lot of the art from the game. This is not so much to do with the quality of the art, but more the inconsistencies of the artist between CGs. One reviewer from gamefaqs speculated that multiple artists worked on the project, as the characters often look very different from CG to CG. Although from the game credits this doesn’t seem to be the case, there are some big inconsistencies between the facial structure and eyes in different drawings. Each character sprite only seems to have a single pose as well, although they do switch outfits.
The writing: For me, the script wasn’t particularly good. The attempted moments of humour didn’t come off at all, and I was instead laughing at the general absurdity of some lines/actions the characters take.
The music: 9 tracks isn’t nearly enough for any full-length game, although the quality of the music itself is ok. This lack of choice leads to either very repetitive or wildly inappropriate choices of music for certain scenes (eg most of Yuki’s H-scenes, even the happy couple have sex ones are accompanied by the same dark, foreboding track).
The sex: I haven’t seen a lot of the game so I can’t really judge this aspect of it, but the scenes I did see were universally short. The genitalia are also crudely drawn, although this can’t be blamed on the original artist, as it all looks fine with mosaics on.
If I had to speculate a bit: Hitomi was the first game produced by Mercure, a newly formed branch of CD Bros. They were testing the waters with a relatively low budget offering, to start off a darker-themed brand name. However, both Hitomi and their subsequent game seem to have been poorly received, and Mercure ended up being shut down.
With the above review, I’m not trying to put people off purchasing/playing the game - I’m probably in the minority for disliking it. It just didn’t work for me.