The Story Writers Oughta be Shot (Spoilers)

Visual Novel Community Archive, 2000-2009
#141

Yet More TENCHI Spoilers

I think the King’s statement about “hating humans” is just an excuse… after all, aside from being married to one, according to Ayeka, he had actually issued a mandate for Jurians to go out and marry outside races (assumedly, humans were thought into this mandate). Theoretically, Yoshi is just as “muddied” as Tenchi is, but the King gives an aside to him that he’s still willing to wait as long as it takes for his return–implying that he still sees Yoshi as the heir to the Royal Throne.

#142

Nice work, Shiin. My only quibble would be that the text is a little hard to read at that size - maybe you could have used a sans-serif font, or made it slightly larger?

It’s nice to see that Kana is inspiring creativity in some of her fans. And believe me, I know exactly how you feel. I was much the same way myself when I first played the game.

Oh, and if you have any way of turning your MIDI into sheet music, I know of someone who might be interested in obtaining a copy.

Good luck in the music video contest!

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