I finished all the best endings in TCI, and my overactive fantasy took over again, and tought up an other one, one some of us might like to have seen.
It’s currently a work in progress, and most of it is still inside my brain, I still have to work it out properly and make it fitting with the actual storyline(s) in TCI to make it work, especially with the personalities of the girls and how they react to sertain situations.
The start would actually be at a point similar to most best endings during the last night that girls(or most of them) are there, aka when they have sex before they leave the next day, starting off with a line of though by Takayuki reflecting back on what happend untill that point.
I’m gonna write it in the style of the game, so no more then 4 lines, then a whiteline, then repeat.
4 lines or less without a name above it, means a line of thought from Takayuki, with name something some one is actually saying, just like in the game.
I’m going to include all the moans, grunts and other sound Takayuki and the girls make, so it won’t be too hard to imagine what happens.
It also will be somewhat longer then the real endings.
The following is a small part from one of the scenes, note that I removed the names of the 2 girls involved, and replaced it with things like her, she, the other girl, and they.
I did this because I don’t really wanna give away which 2 girls this concerns untill I have the entire story finished.
I’m also leaving a very small bit out, since it will tell the exact time this is playing, and will probebly reveal which girls this conserns, and I’ll leave out how they pronouce Takayuki’s name, nearly every girls pronouces his name slighty different, and that would really be giving it away.
So basically this is a teaser.
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I put my head out of the water quick, gasping for air.
My back still turned to the person who pushed me into the bath, I heard one voice laughing, and another gigling, both female and very familiar.
I turned around to chide them both for doing that to me while I was doing them a favor.
I nearly fell down in the bath again, there they were both of them, completely naked, and not seeming to care that I saw it.
Thinking that they might have dropped their towels while pushing me in or laughing at my unvoluntary dip in the bath, I quickly looked around the bath floor, but there were no towels, they came here naked.
Tough getting aroused by seeing two of the most beautifull women in the world naked right in front of me, women I cared for deeply, a tiny voice in the back of my mind said that I might be in serious trouble if I didn’t say anything.
Takayuki:
"Uumm…do you know…that…?“
While pointing at them.
Suddenly her face turned serious.
Girl 1:
”…Takayuki…“
Takayuki:
”…yes?"
Girl 1:
"Since…you couldn’t deside…which one us you loved more…"
Oh man, I screwed up now, I told them I loved them both, and now they’ll probebly want to have sex with me, and make me deside that way, but I don’t want that, I care to much for both of them, to hurt one of them."
Girl 1
"So we desided…“
With this she looked up to the other girl.
A brigh blush appeared on both their faces.
Girl 1
”…that we can share you…“
Wow, did my ears hear that right?
They want to share me!?
Girl 2
”…And…“
Suddenly, and with a slightly nervous and trembling voice she spoke, while looking at the other girl.
Girl 2
”…we can share each other…"
Huh share each other?
What was that supposed to mean?
Just as I was about to ask, she opened her mouth.
Girl 1
"We…"
explenation left out, just to tease you guys so you don’t know who the girls are
So does this mean they did it?
I got the answer to that question as quicly as to the previous one.
The moved slowly, but nervously towards eachother, putting their hands together.
No, they definatly never have been together naked in the sexual sence.
Their bodies came together, and their breasts pressed into eachother.
Then they kissed.
This went more naturally, though still a bit hesistantly, the probebly have done it only a few times before.
I stood frozen as I watched this scene.
Unable to move or do anything else.
Then they broke their kiss, and after a short look to each other they stepped into the bath I was still standing in.
With their free hand, the each grabbed one of mine, and with their eyes invited me to join their kiss while we sat down in the hot bath.
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So tell me what you think, and if you want me to finish the entire story and post it here.
[This message has been edited by BF (edited 11-21-2002).]
[This message has been edited by BF (edited 11-21-2002).]