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Originally posted by ekylo:
I tried writing a Critical Point one yesterday but I got so stuck and frustrated, I actually ended up doing job related work, which is never a good sign.
Sorry, but if you think "Critical Point" is unreviewed, you are mistaken!
My complete list of reviews I have already sent to ladyphoenix-sama, for your reference:
Three Sisters Story
Adam, the double factor
Amys Fantasies
Chain
Critical Point
Desire
Dividead
Eve Burst Error
Gin Iro
GLO*RI*A
Kana
Kango Shicyauzo
Kotobuki
Love Love Show
The Maids Story
May Club
Season of Sakura
Snow Drop
Tokimeki CheckIn!
Transfer Student
Viper Limited
Viper M1
Viper Paradice
Viper V16
W.C.
X-Change
They have not yet been uploaded, but I look forward to it. If you want to read them before that, I can mail all or any of them to you right now.
( Quote from "Martian Succesor Nadesico" (forgot, which episode):
Ruri: "You are a cruel person."
Miyuki: "Am I?"
Ruri "Yes, you are."
Miyuki: "Am I?"
Ruri "Yes, you are."
Miyuki: "But I can't help it..." )
(EDT)
I admit, I mixed this up completely. First of all, it was episode 5. "Miyuki" was really "Megumi". The dialog is mixed together out of two dialogs that were intentionally made very similar, but the beginning was from the first dialog and the ending from the second.
Original first Dialog:
Ruri: "Megumi, you are a very cruel person!"
Megumi: "Am I?"
Ruri: "Yes, you are."
Megumi: "I am?"
Ruri: "Yes, you are!"
Megumi: "I am?"
Ruri: "YES, you are!!!"
Megumi: "Well, I am what I am..."
Original second Dialog:
Ruri: "Megumi..."
Megumi: "I know, I am a vicious person."
Ruri: "Yes, you are!"
Megumi: "But I can't help it..."
Do I have to add, I searched yesterday about two hours for that episode, because I only recalled, it was the episode with the funerals and I thought that was after the survivers on mars were crushed?
(End of EDT)
P.S.: You may still beat me with "Private Nurse" or "Tottemo Pheromone" (or "Sensei 2"). However, I am going to order them all via PeaPri after my skiing-vacation, so I might catch up in march with them.
[This message has been edited by Unicorn (edited 01-15-2003).]